Tuesday, February 18, 2014

Final Blogging Assessment – English 1B

My best post: Tragedy The following blog post will be baced on Tragedy.
 
 
1.    What specific words/phrases demonstrate your writer’s voice? How do these words/phrases showcase your personality as a writer?
 
·         Sporadically
·         personal connection
·         bloom
They show the readers that there is someone behind the screen. The readers are able to understand how I communicate just by finding those words in the responses. It gives them the feeling that there is something more than just empty words, which is a reflection of my personality and voice.
 
2.  What purposeful diction AND syntax choices did you make to enhance your writer’s voice? You must choose to discuss at least one diction AND one syntax technique from the list below. Make sure to include textual evidence from your post where you included the diction and syntax choices you discuss.
 
 
 
Diction: Elevated/formal
“She talks about spring and the beauty of it, how the flowers bloom and the wildlife is newly born”
I use a formal way of talking so that any age of audience can understand what I’m conveying. But the diction is also more elevated so that It can sound more regal and professional on a touching level.
Syntax: Word Order/Sentence Structure
“Have you ever been to a place this special to you? It could be a city spot, or even far out in the middle of nowhere.”
I use words that can help the readers connect and adjust to any situation that comes to them in the post. When someone comes to my blog, I want them to understand anything I may throw at them… so I ask those questions that they can understand and answer on more of a personal level. This creates a very strong sentence structure, held together by emotion


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